Still water at dusk reflecting a pink and purple sky, with a dark treeline and old wooden pilings silhouetted across the far bank.

Candle Face Victim #12: Laughing at the Water's Edge

Written by: Arthur Mills

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Candle Face Victim #12: Laughing at the Water's Edge

January 23, 2024


Main subjects:

  • Victim #12
  • Candle Face

It had been two weeks since my last nocturnal visitor. I was starting to think they had all given up on me, assuming I couldn’t help them. I’ve tried, though. I’ve reached out to a long list of supposed paranormal “experts,” from investigators to mediums and psychics, and I have even shared the spirits’ testimonies on a podcast. So far, no one has stepped forward in any serious way.


Then last night, while I was in the kitchen making a snack, I heard the sunroom door creak open. My first thought was that someone had broken in, and I braced myself. But when I turned, I found another Lost Soul, another victim of Candle Face.


He was a middle-aged man, soaked from head to toe, and he stayed mostly in the shadows as he came toward me. For some reason, I felt relief. After two weeks of silence, seeing him reassured me that I hadn’t been abandoned. Without any prompting, he began telling me what happened.

It was a warm night, and I was stumbling home from a party. My steps were unsteady, and I was still laughing at the ghost stories we’d been joking about all evening. The one about a young ghost girl? Ridiculous.

I was too busy amusing myself to notice the streetlights dimming one by one.

“Believe in some kid ghost?” I scoffed into the night, louder than I meant to. “It’s all just a bunch of BS.”

Then she appeared. She stepped out from the treeline on the north side of Longhorn Dam so suddenly it felt like she’d been standing there the whole time, waiting for me to say it.“

You do not believe,” she said, her voice calm.

I tried to laugh it off, but my voice shook. “This can’t be real,” I said, and I could hear the fear in it.“

Real enough,” she replied.

I wanted to run, but my legs felt heavy, like the night itself was holding me in place. The water was only a few steps away, its surface barely catching what little light was left.

“Why me?” I asked, and now my voice was shaking for real.

She tilted her head and looked at me with her hollow eyes. “Because you laughed at me,” she said. “You mocked what you did not understand. Now you become part of my story.”

Her small hand reached out and grabbed my arm. Her grip was firm, and I couldn’t move. I couldn’t scream. She started pulling me toward the water.

“You will not be forgotten,” she said. There was nothing comforting in it.

Before I fully understood what was happening, I was under. The water closed over my head, cold and suffocating. Her laughter echoed around me.

As the water filled my lungs, I understood too late that Candle Face was real, and that I had just become part of her story.

When he finished, he thanked me for listening. Then, just as quietly as he had come in, he went back through the sunroom door and disappeared into the night.


I couldn’t help but notice the way he kept coughing as he told his story. Each time he did, water poured from his mouth. It was hard to watch. He looked as though he was in pain, grimacing through nearly every word.


The fact that he was soaked made me wonder whether it really was rain. The amount of water coming from his mouth felt like a clue. Rain alone couldn’t explain it. It seemed tied to the way Candle Face killed him. It was as if the water itself had stayed attached to his death.

 
Cartoon portrait of Arthur Mills with gray hair, wearing a tan polo shirt.

Arthur Mills

Arthur Mills served for more than two decades as an Army Intelligence Warrant Officer, specializing in piecing together what others missed: patterns, threats, enemy intent, and clandestine activity. He trained intelligence professionals, built threat models, and briefed commanders and world leaders on global threats and battlefield strategy. After retiring from the military, he moved into private investigation, focusing on missing persons, human trafficking, opposition research, and domestic terrorism. He holds a degree in Counter Terrorism Studies.


He has been writing books since 2006 and is an award-winning author. He publishes under his own name, though much of what he has written has appeared under pseudonyms. Readers may already know those titles without knowing they are his. The separation is intentional. His books invite readers to interpret what is hidden, and so does the way he publishes them.